Evils Falter.. The Journey to the
Paradise Begins
Once, there was a notorious group of third-year students in
CNSHS. They called themselves Heaven's Devils. In one way or another, they were
always too flashy regarding breaking the rules. They had 10 members including
their leader, who is the worst of them, is named Teach. The other members were
Paul, Elijah, Isaac, Jacob, Jonah, Isaiah, Michael, Gabriel, and Francis.
After a school day, well they usually just slack off it, they
met in Teach’ house and went to get some drinks. (alcohol) They broke the law.
After drinking, all the members of Heaven’s Devils slept in their leader’s
house yet they woke up in a place they weren’t familiar with. They found
themselves in a dark forest with only the top of the mountain (the mountain is
in the forest) visible. It was too bright, it shines too much that they can’t
handle its rays.
Then, a stranger appeared in front of them. It resembled an
evil demon (well, it was pretty redundant to emphasize its appearance). They
wondered what that stranger would do and even if they are evil in their own
ways, they still shivered in the appearance of the demon-looking stranger. It
was intimidating.
Shocks were sent into their spines after the first word
uttered by the stranger. It was pretty normal though. “Leave,” that’s what the
stranger said. The group then replied “How?” The stranger then commanded them, “Follow
me.” As they followed the stranger, they went deeper into the forest and in
their shock, they reached their school.
Upon their entry on the gate, they saw souls lingering
around there. They thought that it was their school, the same school yet it
shows the evil side of it. They were having goose bumps just seeing their school
in an evil way. The stranger, noticing that the group was scared, told them
that this isn’t even the start yet and what they’re seeing here is not even the
appetizer. They haven’t stepped out of the starting line yet.
They now entered the school gate and that marked their
entry on the Ante-CNSHS. As they went deeper in the Ante-CNSHS, they saw a
devil which looks less intimidating than the stranger. He was named “Die”
though. Even being less intimidating than the stranger, they were still too
scared on his presence. He’s still a devil after all. They saw ‘Die’ using his logbook and transports to incoming souls to somewhere, maybe
somewhere they really belong.
With the help of the stranger, they were able to pass
through the guard without being investigated, well they would have found a way
or another since they are still living.
As they went on their journey unto the Ante-CNSHS, they saw
a long line of students carrying huge watches, wristwatches. It was gigantic
and they can see in the students’ reactions that the wristwatches were too
heavy. As they tried to approach the stranger, they couldn’t since they didn’t
know how to start it, neither call him by his name. The stranger noticed and
introduced himself as “Change”. That was a weird name. They asked Change about
how long the students would be carrying the load and why were they asked to
carry that. He explained that they would be carrying it until they go home, and
until they go to school the next day again. That was to emphasize that they
should go to the school early since they always come to school late. ‘Change’
added that they can’t remove the gigantic wristwatch.
Paul shivered. Peculiarly, he saw himself in the line of
students. He was saddened that he would be receiving the torture he is seeing.
He surely didn’t want that. With that on his thoughts, he decided to change for
the better. He disappeared and ‘Change’ whispers to himself, “ONE DOWN!”
*Paul, Elijah, Isaac,
Jacob, Jonah, Isaiah, Michael, Gabriel, Francis, Teach
Before entering, ‘Change’ explained that CNSHS was divided
into three sections. 1st is the Excessive Love for Things (not
actually bad), which is composed of the first two circles. 2nd is the Too Weak of Love for Good Things, which is
composed of the third to sixth circle. The 3rd is the The Excessive
Love for Bad Things, the last three circles.
They now entered the realm of EVIL CNSHS. They went into
its 1st circle. They entered hell. The 1st circle was
called “The Noise” which is excessive love for noise. The students in this
circle are those who can’t hold their noise down. They can’t stand not speaking
or making a noise.
As a punishment, they would be isolated in a room
surrounded with white walls to emphasize that they are alone, without someone
to talk to, without someone to be with, without someone to tease. If they dare
to speak a word complaining, more so just making noise, the amount of their
stay would be doubled. This station is circled in the LRC.
Out of naughtiness, Michael, one of the members of the
group, started looking at all the rooms and surprisingly, saw himself in one of
the rooms. He was left clueless. He didn’t want that too. He wanted to change.
He disappeared without anyone knowing. His groupmates wondered for a while but
they stopped looking for him, by ‘Change’s’ order. “Two Down”
*Paul, Elijah, Isaac,
Jacob, Jonah, Isaiah, Michael, Gabriel, Francis, Teach
The group continued their journey, though they’re still
wondering where their other two group members were. They proceeded to the
second circle, the Glutton, which is excessive love for food and drinks. The
students here are those who can’t even fight the desire to eat food even when
it’s not allowed. They are punished by staying with all the food wastes around
them that smells so bad. They can even see the normal students in Canteen eating
food normally as they suffer more. Again, just like how Paul and Michael
disappeared, Jonah disappeared without leaving a trace and feeling guilt. He
got his urge to change his behaviour and left the group’s journey.
*Paul,
Elijah, Isaac, Jacob, Jonah, Isaiah, Michael, Gabriel, Francis,
Teach
Even with less three members, they continued their journey.
They passed the first section of CNSHS and they were about to go to the 2nd
one.
They entered the 3rd circle, the Hard-headed
Rule Breakers, with too less obedience that is being guarded by Ms. Rejas, a
teacher they knew too much. She had punished them for a lot of time now.
The
“hard-headed”s are forced to bang their heads onto harder rocks with feeling
only half the pain so that they could have the ability to break all the stones
given to them which amounts to about 1000x they became hard-headed in their
entire life. That’s what would happen to the hard-headed. Continuous bowing
down of their heads represent submissiveness.
All
of them, the 7 group members + ‘Change’ saw Francis suffering from that but not
experiencing the same trauma, the other group members weren’t moved that much
and decided to continue the journey while Francis decided to fall back and
change. “Four Down,” Change says.
Rule
breaking includes Vandalism and Cutting classes.
*Paul, Elijah, Isaac,
Jacob, Jonah, Isaiah, Michael, Gabriel, Francis, Teach
They
entered the 4th and 5th circles quite instantaneously.
The 4th circle was composed of students who don’t make efforts to
clean their place or even mess it up more or the “Litterers”. The 5th
circle, on the other hand, was composed of students who don’t make efforts to
make assignments or even scan a page of his book in his house. They even go as
far as forging their parents’ signatures. Both of the circles represent sloth.
The
punishment for the students in the 4th circle was that they would
lie down on the field and be poured down different types of wastes they didn’t
even make an effort to clean like snacks and candy wrappers and softdrink and
plastic bottles.
On
the other side, the punishment for the 5th circle was quite light.
In the classroom, books, papers and pens would be scattered and that they need
to write, study, and review for the entirety of their stay on the 5th
circle. Elijah and Jacob, the sloths, decided to change for the better.
*Paul, Elijah, Isaac,
Jacob, Jonah, Isaiah, Michael, Gabriel, Francis,
Teach
The too much lack of respect was what they encountered after
entering the sixth circle in the gym. They see students kissing the feet of
everyone they meet. Isaac, Isaiah, and Gabriel were starting to falter already
but Teach isn’t even in the least, moved. The students in the 6th
circle, the Disrespectful, are those students who didn’t show enough respect for
the other students, the teachers, their parents, and even other people they
encounter.
‘Change’ then explained that that isn’t only the punishment
they receive. They also see their opposite sides in the mirrors before they
were even able to go and kiss the people’s feet. They would need to learn to
respect themselves first. Isaiah was terribly moved by the punishment and
decided to change though he left a message to the other three. “Notice ‘Change’?
His presence is depleting right now. Find it out”.
*Paul, Elijah, Isaac,
Jacob, Jonah, Isaiah, Michael, Gabriel, Francis,
Teach
Intrigued by the message, Gabriel decided to keep an eye on
‘Change’. He was not able to do that though because of the next circle they
entered. It was too dark. They could not see anything except for the path they
are taking. This was the 7th circle, the Envious. The students here
are those who give too much love for the material things or characteristics the
other people have, in a bad way. Gabriel, who was struck in the heart after
seeing how the envious students gets punished, disappears without being able to
relay the message on the other two. He wasn’t able to say goodbye.
The
mood gets heavier and the atmosphere gets darker. That’s what Isaac noticed. He
was left with Teach and ‘Change’. They proceeded to the 8th circle,
the Violence. He didn’t feel good about this. He was the most violent among
them. Cries, moans, scolds from parents, that’s what they could hear. Even
though they couldn’t see it because of the dark, ‘Change’ explains that the
students in this circle are constantly beating up each other. Those who only
have the strongest will to surpass the violence would be able to get out of the
beatings, yet not the circle. Harsh Bullies and people who use violence against
themselves are to be punished here too. This was stationed in the Guidance
Office and Isaac suddenly disappeared. ‘Change’ is starting to lose his energy
right now and Teach is the only one left for him to finish his job.
Going
on to the last part of their journey, ‘Change’ tells Teach to get ready since
this would hurt him a lot. The last circle, the 9th circle they
would enter is “The Cheaters” stationed in the office. In here rest the
cheating students FOREVER. They would see cheaters getting caught by teachers
and suffering the same fate as them. They are even shown cheating students
failing miserably in life, living in depression, smoking, and dying by drinking
alcohol. It hurts to see that the same people as them are suffering too much
but they are still forever locked in the 9th circle.
Teach was totally moved. He didn’t know why but hearing
from ‘Change’ the punishments the students were receiving, he wanted to change.
‘Change’ really helped all of them. ‘Change’ changed them and he wanted to
thank him but he was not able to. He disappeared already.
‘Change’, on the other hand, has already rose back up to
heaven and whispered to himself, “It’s really though portraying a devil” but he
needed to. He was praised above because he was able to change the “Heaven’s
Devils” to “Heaven’s Angels”
The Heaven’s Devils lived perfectly. They didn’t do
anything that bad now. They strived hard and worked hard.